I hope the following is helpful. If you want rainbows and butterflies, avert your eyes now...
I don't see anything about this site that makes me want to type in my personal info, and the "schtick" is a turn-off. Are you, or have you previously been, a middle aged man going through a mid-life crisis? If not, then your caricature of their desires seems overdone. Plus, the divorce stuff is a major turn off to those who are still married.
Why does the M3 page mention an Eclipse, NASCAR, and a 6.4L V6?
You have some rendering issues in Chrome on Mac. Haven't tried any other browsers.
Most importantly, as a dealer considering this website as a source of leads, I wouldn't think the leads are serious inquiries with purchase intent. That's going to make it a tough sell.
I want truth - I do not might failing as long I am learning. I appreciate you taking time to help me.
-this is a lead generation site for the car dealership industry; the phone is optional, but this is how this business will make so if you want to save some easy money 1 minute could save you several grand. Internet surely are always discounted than floor prices.
I thought I was helpful with the divorce stuff - but several people have told me and you are confirming it - to keep it more on the positive note. I am not a middle age guy - I read a lot of books about them and am married to one so I am trying - was going for the wild look - perhaps I have overdone it.
M3 - cut paste errors; will correct;
The browsers I have testing on are IE8, Safrai, and Firefox. I will take a look at Chrome.
Hmm - I do not understand what you are saying - why do you think these leads are not serious inquires with purchase intent.
My competition websites are one page with very little info except the same signup form. In less than 2 years they are bringing $5M/year And they are spending $55K/week on adword campaign.
I can not afford so I am trying to do this organically initially. Albeit a klutz attempt.
I don't see anything about this site that makes me want to type in my personal info, and the "schtick" is a turn-off. Are you, or have you previously been, a middle aged man going through a mid-life crisis? If not, then your caricature of their desires seems overdone. Plus, the divorce stuff is a major turn off to those who are still married.
Why does the M3 page mention an Eclipse, NASCAR, and a 6.4L V6?
You have some rendering issues in Chrome on Mac. Haven't tried any other browsers.
Most importantly, as a dealer considering this website as a source of leads, I wouldn't think the leads are serious inquiries with purchase intent. That's going to make it a tough sell.